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DearMercedes.
Number of posts : 647 Age : 29 Location : Alabama again. Job/hobbies : Mental disorders. Humor : I'm a funny person when you're on my good side. Registration date : 2007-10-15
Character sheet Character Name: Sephieres Race: Fairy Rank: Yeoman
| Subject: Words So Obvious Were Never Said. Thu Apr 03, 2008 1:15 pm | |
| Here goes the story of two broken souls and one life time The best of friends, still however hiding the truth with a lie The girl keeping a secret locked deep within her own heart Little did she know the boy was keeping the same one, tearing him apart
Always together, everyone would always say No use to tell them they'll figure it out oneday What wasn't obvious to thereselves Was obvious to everyone else
That girl would lay on the ground staring at the sky Consumed with thoughts of him, and she didn't know why Taking flowers, counting the petals....he loves me, he loves me not... Praying for him, but she realized that was more then alot.....
That boy never knew what to say Getting more and more tounge tied everyday All he ever really wanted was her But was afraid it would never be like before
Who knew loving someone could make things so akward To afraid to lose what they had, they never moved forward Neither could sleep at night, for reality was better then a dream They waited till the end of forever, or maybe thats just how it seemed
She could never love me.....this feeling couldn't go both ways, he thought Little did he know that his smile and embrace is all she drempt about He could never love me, she'd so Naively say But he loved her more with each passing day
Years went by each left there home town, still staying in touch Two best friends tied at the heart by a harmless highschool crush Every weekend they met up at that old coffee shop Knowing it was easier to face love then to try to stop.....
One weekend the girl decided not to go Work that week had been slow That boy lost intrest, knowing it would never be If they would of opened there eyes...who knows what each would of been able to see
Many more years passed, the girls dream became real, now a poet and no less a writer She decided hands down, how things worked out 5 years before was better She says she no longer loves him, little did she know in everything she wrote Clues of him lingered, his smile, his eyes, his love, and every word he spoke
That boy later became the singer of a famous band Still carrying the memories of her in the palm of his hand He had it all, and anyone he wanted, but he still wanted her He hated his self for not seeing if they could of been more....
A girl lying upon cold tile looking for insperation, that could fix her broken heart A boy lying upon a bed, knowing one wrong move could rip his heart apart The girl knows it's worth the risk, she still loved him after all those years The boy gets up knowing it's finally time to face what he'd always feared
A car speeding to that girls road A car speeding towards that boys road Two cars crash halfway Only love destroying another perfect day
Two bodies found laying on the blacktop all alone Hand in hand finally to find there true home And what they said in there final moments one will forever guess Maybe they said it all, maybe nothing but a final kiss
And me I somehow always knew There last words where I love you | |
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AmonXAisha
Number of posts : 43 Age : 31 Location : In my blood red dungeon!! Job/hobbies : Musician / Playing music, Proffessional Hugger. Humor : RANDOM! Registration date : 2007-11-25
Character sheet Character Name: Amon Moonshine Race: Vampire Rank: Serf
| Subject: Re: Words So Obvious Were Never Said. Sat Apr 05, 2008 3:56 pm | |
| OhMiGosh Mer! That poem is like... I really don't know what word to use... The only thing i have in mind is : Wow... This poem is, From FAR, your best poem ever... I love it, I love YOU. You're an awesome writer Mercedes... Just, Don't stop writing those poems, They're just too important and they hit ,Well to me at least, Deep deep down in the heart... Mer, I'll never forgive you, those poems keep making me think about you, they get in my head.. You're wonderfull Mercedes, And I know you know you are.
I LOVE YOU MERCEDES!!! KEEP THOSE POEMS FLOWING!
Lots of love, Ben | |
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DearMercedes.
Number of posts : 647 Age : 29 Location : Alabama again. Job/hobbies : Mental disorders. Humor : I'm a funny person when you're on my good side. Registration date : 2007-10-15
Character sheet Character Name: Sephieres Race: Fairy Rank: Yeoman
| Subject: Re: Words So Obvious Were Never Said. Sat Apr 05, 2008 4:55 pm | |
| Thanks Ben. I Love You Too. I Cant Stop Writing. Its My Life. Along With Photography... And Im Glad That You Liked My Poem ^-^ | |
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AmonXAisha
Number of posts : 43 Age : 31 Location : In my blood red dungeon!! Job/hobbies : Musician / Playing music, Proffessional Hugger. Humor : RANDOM! Registration date : 2007-11-25
Character sheet Character Name: Amon Moonshine Race: Vampire Rank: Serf
| Subject: Re: Words So Obvious Were Never Said. Sun Apr 06, 2008 12:11 am | |
| Well.. I'm glad YOU'RE glad I liked your poem ^.^ Sorry if I'm not on this site much.. =( I gots loads of things to do and I'm most of the time on my forum. So if you ever have the time, come check it out! Here's the link : http://bloody-dreams-blvd.darkbb.com/ You can leave me a PM and I'll reply to it for sure. I'm just not on this site alot lately. So yea.. Love you lots Merrie! Hope to talk to you sooner than soon! Lots of sweet love, Ben | |
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DearMercedes.
Number of posts : 647 Age : 29 Location : Alabama again. Job/hobbies : Mental disorders. Humor : I'm a funny person when you're on my good side. Registration date : 2007-10-15
Character sheet Character Name: Sephieres Race: Fairy Rank: Yeoman
| Subject: Re: Words So Obvious Were Never Said. Sun Apr 06, 2008 7:08 pm | |
| Lol Im Glad Your Glad Im Glad You Liked My Poem ^-^ Haha.
Its Ok I Understand. Ill Defiantly Check It Out Sometime.
Mmmk Ill Do That Maby. Haha.
I Love You Too! I Hope To Talk To You As Well ^-^ | |
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Paul Moderator
Number of posts : 476 Age : 30 Humor : lol Registration date : 2007-10-12
Character sheet Character Name: Pierron Race: Vampire Rank: Serf
| Subject: Re: Words So Obvious Were Never Said. Mon Apr 07, 2008 7:00 pm | |
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DearMercedes.
Number of posts : 647 Age : 29 Location : Alabama again. Job/hobbies : Mental disorders. Humor : I'm a funny person when you're on my good side. Registration date : 2007-10-15
Character sheet Character Name: Sephieres Race: Fairy Rank: Yeoman
| Subject: Re: Words So Obvious Were Never Said. Mon Apr 07, 2008 7:04 pm | |
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Dora95
Number of posts : 54 Age : 29 Location : With everyone i love(friendly)!!! Job/hobbies : Drawing Humor : Lol Registration date : 2007-11-09
Character sheet Character Name: Always_Dora_Stars Race: Vampire Rank: Serf
| Subject: Re: Words So Obvious Were Never Said. Mon Apr 07, 2008 7:06 pm | |
| lol yea it doesn't make sense... lol, XD!!!! | |
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Paul Moderator
Number of posts : 476 Age : 30 Humor : lol Registration date : 2007-10-12
Character sheet Character Name: Pierron Race: Vampire Rank: Serf
| Subject: Re: Words So Obvious Were Never Said. Mon Apr 07, 2008 8:51 pm | |
| MER WAKE UP U HAVE A BOOK AND UR CONTROLER ON U OMG | |
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DearMercedes.
Number of posts : 647 Age : 29 Location : Alabama again. Job/hobbies : Mental disorders. Humor : I'm a funny person when you're on my good side. Registration date : 2007-10-15
Character sheet Character Name: Sephieres Race: Fairy Rank: Yeoman
| Subject: Re: Words So Obvious Were Never Said. Tue Apr 08, 2008 5:39 pm | |
| Lmao Stfu Paul! I Was Tiirrrreeeeeddddddd!!!!!!!!! | |
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Crazy_Chiqa94 Moderator
Number of posts : 72 Age : 30 Location : Damnet I'm in love with Forrest McCann! Job/hobbies : singing, taekwondo, dancing,ballet,and having fun! Humor : well maybe every once in a while it slips out Registration date : 2007-10-25
Character sheet Character Name: Tokimeki Race: Vampire Rank: Serf
| Subject: Re: Words So Obvious Were Never Said. Sat Apr 19, 2008 5:51 pm | |
| lol! u just pulled a cayley! (good thing im not cayley!) | |
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