Darkness Of Death And Life

Subject: Darkness Of Death And Life Wed Dec 05, 2007 10:33 pm

Thy is stuck in this form.
Left alone to cry and mourn.
I here thee spirit and soul.
And wonder how thy's life could be so dull.
If thee wishes to pass on and die.
Thy friends come along and cry.
O'er the day thy's mind thinks of the abyss.
Oh, what about thee would thy people miss?
Thee does not know what has happened to thy.
But thee left thy here to think about it and sigh.
Sometimes when thy is alone.
Thy cries because thou is on thy's own.
Thy tears thou cries are bitter and warm.
Thee flow with life, but take no form.
Thou cries only because thy's heart is torn.
And thy finds it difficult to carry onward.
It is because thy thinks there is nothing to look forward.
Thou would cry among thy treasured friends.
And maybe thou would have something to look forward in thy end.
But who do thee know that stops that long.
To help thy other carry on.
Thee world moves fast and it would rather pass thou by.
Then to stop and see what makes thou cry.
It's painful and sad, and sometimes thyself cries.
And no one cares for thy reason why.
And sometimes thou sees someone die by thy knife.
Tis is all the Darkness Of Death And Life.

Subject: Re: Darkness Of Death And Life Wed Dec 05, 2007 10:39 pm

its a really great poem but whats up with the Thy Thou and Thee things

Subject: Re: Darkness Of Death And Life Wed Dec 05, 2007 10:43 pm

i felt like doing it that way
i will repost it so you can understand it better

Subject: Re: Darkness Of Death And Life Wed Dec 05, 2007 10:46 pm

no its ok i like to discover stuff

Subject: Re: Darkness Of Death And Life Wed Dec 05, 2007 10:48 pm

I am stuck in this form.
Left alone to cry and mourn.
I here my spirit and soul.
And wonder how my life could be so dull.
If I wish to pass on and die.
My friends come along and cry.
Over the day my mind thinks of the abyss.
Oh, what about me would people miss?
I do not know what has happened to me.
But I am left here to think about it and sigh.
Sometimes when I am is alone.
I cry because I am is on my own.
The tears I cry are bitter and warm.
They flow with life, but take no form.
I cry only because my heart is torn.
And I find it difficult to carry onward.
It is because I think there is nothing to look forward.
I would cry among my treasured friends.
And maybe I would have something to look forward in the end.
But who do I know that stops that long.
To help another carry on.
The world moves fast and it would rather pass me by.
Then to stop and see what makes me cry.
It's painful and sad, and sometimes I cry.
And no one cares for the reason why.
And sometimes I see someone die by a knife.
This is all the Darkness Of Death And Life.

Subject: Re: Darkness Of Death And Life Thu Dec 06, 2007 12:16 am

i............love...............it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Subject: Re: Darkness Of Death And Life Thu Dec 06, 2007 8:39 am

ahhh now i understand the poem better and its a really extrordinary poem one of my fave yet

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